How to Use Descriptive Paragraph Starters
One of the attributes that authors will often use in a solution section of a white paper are what I refer to as descriptive paragraph starters.
This text feature is used when you want the reader to pay special attention to a particular solution characteristic. The descriptive text immediately following the leading descriptor helps the reader better understand the benefits of that attribute. The use of either bold, italics, underlining or some combination is often used to enhance the descriptive starter.
There are three ways that you can use descriptive paragraph starters:
1. The Run-on Starter is used when the descriptor and the body copy flow together as a contiguous statement. An example of this style would be:
Acme Freight Management provides a solid transportation execution system that will automatically select the lowest cost carrier, consolidate loads, and provide carrier-approved labels and electronic manifesting for all modes of shipment, from parcel deliveries to ocean containers.
2. The Dashed Starter – This style is used when the descriptive starter needs to isolated from the paragraph text and identified as as standalone attribute. A period can also be used instead of the dash. This is often used when the solution has a series of components that should each be identified along with their own descriptive paragraph. The example below would be one one characteristic within a series of descriptive characteristics:
PDF Spam – Another form of spam is PDF spam, where a spammer distributes an e-mail message along with a PDF attachment. To date, PDF spam accounts for about 4 percent of all spam messages sent, yet this format could prove to be significantly more malicious than image spam.
3. The Colon Starter: This style is used when the descriptive attribute is either part of a collective solution or has a series of sub-components within that attribute. An example of this style would be:
Transaction: Key metrics a sales force uses to measure the sales process including: Sales Deal Size, Sales per Existing Customer, Sales per New Customer, and Sales Price Variance.
So when you want solution features to stand out and be noticed, use paragraph starters. Your readers will appreciate them and better understand the specific solution benefits in your white paper.






June 8th, 2009 at 4:15 pm
This is not good, it will make my english grade go down. “Run-on” sentences aren’t good. They are marked down. No one uses them. Fix it.
June 8th, 2009 at 4:57 pm
Tiffany,
I don’t understand your comment. The use of the term “run-on” in this post is merely a description of a technique to have the starting words “run onto” the accompanying sentence. It does not imply the approval or use of a “run-on” sentence.
I think you’re over-reacting.
Jonathan
July 8th, 2009 at 12:15 pm
Tiffany. Your wrong. Jonathan is right. The “Run-on” sentence starter is used in the business world often. It allows for a “buzz” word or name to be highlighted.
July 8th, 2009 at 12:18 pm
Bob. “grammer” is spelled GRAMMAR.
September 26th, 2009 at 5:14 pm
Good starters thanks : )
November 3rd, 2009 at 10:59 pm
Cool Post Keep up the good work!
Sandy x